Tuesday, September 4, 2018

Earth Hour/Power off

This week in reading we have been reading Earth Hour.
This story is about the Gater village's power going off.

Every hour Sam's mum  thought“will the power ever come back on”. It was getting close to diner so Sam's mum asked the” robots to make diner and I will get you a new battery from the combed”. They  all went to bed after dinner then a miracle happened the power came back on it woke Sam up Sam raced to every bedroom in the house to wake everyone up.Once everyone was wake and saw the power was on they raced to every house in the village to make sure they knew the power was on.


  1. that looks like a good book Lucas maybe you can put a little more detail in. what else do you think you can improve on? keep up the good work!


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